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Offline Vive_HIH_Aleksey

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Re: Advice/Thoughts on Story I'm Writing
« Reply #30 on: November 29, 2009, 12:40:14 PM »
Well, my friends, I have FINALLY updated my story!!!! ENJOY!!!!!!!!
Hatred – this is a disgusting feeling. Yes, there is sport gambling, there is a striving to win. But to hate someone – this is awful! I think, that first of all you have to learn to respect your rival. -- Evgeni Plushenko

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Re: Advice/Thoughts on Story I'm Writing
« Reply #31 on: November 29, 2009, 01:01:33 PM »
I confirm what I said in my previous posts once again: excellent job! :- )

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Re: Advice/Thoughts on Story I'm Writing
« Reply #32 on: December 03, 2009, 02:17:30 AM »
Updated again!
Hatred – this is a disgusting feeling. Yes, there is sport gambling, there is a striving to win. But to hate someone – this is awful! I think, that first of all you have to learn to respect your rival. -- Evgeni Plushenko

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Re: Advice/Thoughts on Story I'm Writing
« Reply #33 on: December 04, 2009, 07:44:39 PM »
Keep writing.  I'll be waiting patiently for more.  I absolutely love it!

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Re: Advice/Thoughts on Story I'm Writing
« Reply #34 on: May 03, 2011, 03:35:23 AM »
Bet y'all thought I forgot about this, didn't ya?

I HAVE UPDATED! Yeah I know it's been forever. And honestly I got cought up with the skating bit, I know I forgot to explain the moves like I did in the past but that will be remedied in the final draft.

ENJOY!
Hatred – this is a disgusting feeling. Yes, there is sport gambling, there is a striving to win. But to hate someone – this is awful! I think, that first of all you have to learn to respect your rival. -- Evgeni Plushenko

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Re: Advice/Thoughts on Story I'm Writing
« Reply #35 on: May 03, 2011, 05:04:27 AM »
Like your writing...Detailed. That's my problem:p people say I am great with words, but whenever I start writing I never get to go detailed:p Really a problem...

Ohh, and I do like the twist with the dress, if that can be seen as one... If only clothes had memories:p

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Re: Advice/Thoughts on Story I'm Writing
« Reply #36 on: May 03, 2011, 06:16:53 AM »
Thanks! Well, the "twist" I was referring to has not yet been revealed! It won't be revealed until later!
Hatred – this is a disgusting feeling. Yes, there is sport gambling, there is a striving to win. But to hate someone – this is awful! I think, that first of all you have to learn to respect your rival. -- Evgeni Plushenko