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Re: OTMA Poetry part 2
« Reply #60 on: May 30, 2011, 06:47:36 PM »
Thanks, Grace! I'm glad you think so.
"Господь им дал дар по молитвам их размягчать окаменелые наши сердца за их страдания..Мне думается, что если люди будут молиться Царской Cемье, оттают сердца с Божией помощью."

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Re: OTMA Poetry part 2
« Reply #61 on: June 02, 2011, 05:43:11 PM »
Here are mine..... please do not laugh I wrote all of these at age 11


Their Last Night

Being woken up in the middle of the night
Being told to get dressed what a sight
"There is am out break in the street" they are told
Walking down the stairs brave and bold
In a celler 20 minutes it took
To kill a family in a small little nook
That night a familys dreams were shattered
With their clothes bloody and tattered
With a family so teriffic
How could their death be so heriffic?




Their fate:

Slowly the Romanovs are awakend in the night
Slowly the Romanovs get dessed with no sign of fright
Slowly the Romanovs go down 23 stairs
Slowly the Romanovs walk it to the celler and ask for chairs
Slowly the Romanovs are arranged in the room
Slowly the Romanovs are shot and killed in the celler where their screams still loom.


What if?

What if the Romanovs had lived?
What if they haden't been shot and killed?
What if Alexei had grown up to be the tsar?
What if the Grand Duchesses had lived and married?
What if it hadn't been so soon?
Would we still have tsars and Romanovs?
We will never know we ill just have to ask "What if?"


Hope you like them ... Done for a mothers day project in grade 6..... we had to make all different kinds of poems and this is what I wrote.

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Re: OTMA Poetry part 2
« Reply #62 on: June 02, 2011, 06:29:45 PM »
Awesome! These are really well done... I especially like the first one which i noticed was the one that is your signature!  :)

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Re: OTMA Poetry part 2
« Reply #63 on: June 03, 2011, 06:05:02 PM »
I especially like the 2nd and 3rd ones. Very good!  :)

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Re: OTMA Poetry part 2
« Reply #64 on: June 04, 2011, 11:04:30 AM »
I especially like the 2nd and 3rd ones. Very good!  :)
Awesome! These are really well done... I especially like the first one which i noticed was the one that is your signature!  :)

Thanks!

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Re: OTMA Poetry part 2
« Reply #65 on: June 04, 2011, 12:42:47 PM »
Maria-Nikolaevna, your poems are great - all three of them!



Holly, I know you have gotten countless compliments on your poem, so add me to the list - it was amazingly beautiful.I loved it. Write some more, pleasepleaseplease!!!
PS: You should write some and put it on otmaa.org-just an idea!

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Re: OTMA Poetry part 2
« Reply #66 on: June 08, 2011, 07:27:50 PM »
Thanks so much, Olga Bernice! That means a lot.

I'd like to write more if I can get some ideas. Let me know if you have any!
"Господь им дал дар по молитвам их размягчать окаменелые наши сердца за их страдания..Мне думается, что если люди будут молиться Царской Cемье, оттают сердца с Божией помощью."

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Re: OTMA Poetry part 2
« Reply #67 on: June 28, 2011, 03:43:38 PM »
In a sudden burst of inspiration, I wrote these sort of haiku-like poems, even though they don't follow the rules of a haiku:

Sitting in the night
Pearl choker necklaces
Four innocent girls
Their world comes crashing down around them.

An old stump.
Once sat upon by a Grand Duchess.
Alexander Palace Gardens.
Neglected and overgrown.

Hot September afternoon.
The sky is stark blue.
A camera shutter snaps.
A memento of captivity at home.

       Photograph 1917
Anastasia, daughter of the man who was once Tsar.
But sixteen years old, sits on a stump,
Posing for her sister.
Wind blows her blouse-ruffles,
Dry grass wavers.
Not even her pearl necklace shows to remind us of what once was.

The last 3 are about this picture:


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Re: OTMA Poetry part 2
« Reply #68 on: June 28, 2011, 04:34:34 PM »
Really Awesome GrandDuchessAndrea!!

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Re: OTMA Poetry part 2
« Reply #69 on: June 28, 2011, 09:18:56 PM »
love it GrandDuchessAndrea!!!

Really good!

It might be fun to post photos as inspirations


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Re: OTMA Poetry part 2
« Reply #70 on: August 11, 2011, 03:47:15 PM »
I just randomly came up with this one :


We once were happy, singing and dancing
Being the kids we were - Being happy and prancing
Until we were imprisoned
Then our laughter was almost gone
Papa said it was for the best
And one day we would be free to sing our little song
I tryed with all my heart to beleave what he said was true
But some how I knew Papa's words were not true
Then that morning - That last morning of my life
I thought nothing was wrong
Until I saw Baby's smile fade
And Natasha's laughter was gone
That morning Olshka - My life flashed before my eyes - That happy life I once knew
And Tanya - I tried my best to get us out - I really did
And dear Papa before I go - That last thought I was thinking before I heard the gun go off - Was you saying " Mashka we love you so"
Now Mama, Papa, Olya, and Tanya, Anya, and Alexei - I must now go, but one more thing I have to say, I love you all so very much so.


Does any- one have an idea what to call this?

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Re: OTMA Poetry part 2
« Reply #71 on: August 11, 2011, 06:22:04 PM »
Then That Morning... how does that sound?

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Re: OTMA Poetry part 2
« Reply #72 on: August 11, 2011, 08:18:16 PM »
That sounds really good!!  :D

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Re: OTMA Poetry part 2
« Reply #73 on: August 11, 2011, 08:25:42 PM »
 ;D  Good! I'm glad i could be of help!

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Re: OTMA Poetry part 2
« Reply #74 on: August 11, 2011, 09:48:38 PM »
excellent work ....what I like is how it speeds  up to the end...like the thoughts would

nice title too!

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