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« Reply #45 on: March 21, 2011, 01:58:37 PM »
All i can say Holly is... WOW! That was amazing!  :)

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« Reply #46 on: March 21, 2011, 02:01:37 PM »
All i can say Holly is... WOW! That was amazing!  :)

Thank you very much!! :)

I've been very bored, haha.
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« Reply #47 on: March 21, 2011, 02:31:12 PM »
Wonderful Holly!!
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I've been very bored, haha.
That puts me in the unusual position of wishing you more boredom!=)

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« Reply #48 on: March 21, 2011, 03:03:27 PM »
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I've been very bored, haha.
That puts me in the unusual position of wishing you more boredom!=)

I have to agree with her on that!  ;D

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« Reply #49 on: March 21, 2011, 05:16:13 PM »
That puts me in the unusual position of wishing you more boredom!=)

Thank you!!

And I assure you, your wishing won't be in vain. =)

If anyone has any requests on poetry/prose I would be happy to oblige.
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« Reply #50 on: March 21, 2011, 06:33:52 PM »
All i can say Holly is... WOW! That was amazing!  :)
Yes! The rhyming was wonderful, you are a great poet! You have inspired me to write more OTMA poetry, I haven't done very much in a while.
Who is the picture of?
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Re: OTMA Poetry part 2
« Reply #51 on: March 21, 2011, 06:49:43 PM »
All i can say Holly is... WOW! That was amazing!  :)
Yes! The rhyming was wonderful, you are a great poet! You have inspired me to write more OTMA poetry, I haven't done very much in a while.
Who is the picture of?

Thank you! I'm glad to have inspired you to write some more.

The picture is of Anastasia.
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Re: OTMA Poetry part 2
« Reply #52 on: March 22, 2011, 09:05:25 AM »


Don't ever stop writing, dushka.
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« Reply #53 on: March 22, 2011, 10:28:13 AM »
A poem I started ages ago about Maria and only finished it a couple weeks ago:

A paintbox, with colors half gone,
where is the girl who once painted with this glorious faded rainbow?
Gone, her time is past upon this earth,
snuffed out only ninteen years before her birth.
A lock of hair, a soft warm brown, shot with red and gold,
A piece of lace, a single pearl, white and cold,
And one last daub of sky blue, the color of her eyes.

Maria Nicholaievna--1899-1918

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« Reply #54 on: March 22, 2011, 11:43:41 AM »
Nice one, Andrea.
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Re: OTMA Poetry part 2
« Reply #55 on: March 22, 2011, 08:19:14 PM »
Andrea, you evoked Marie quite well. I like the later part particularly ! 

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Re: OTMA Poetry part 2
« Reply #56 on: March 22, 2011, 09:18:12 PM »
Don't ever stop writing, dushka.

Never never. And don't you either. =)


I like the use of colors in your poem, Andrea.
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Re: OTMA Poetry part 2
« Reply #58 on: March 23, 2011, 10:54:04 AM »
So impossibly beautiful.

I'm glad you think so. =3
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« Reply #59 on: May 24, 2011, 04:16:16 AM »


This is great, the image and the words put together, it is very artistic!