It's marvelous!!! Only one thing--the word "sane" is used twice, and it means the opposite of "insane" which means mad, crazy. So the sentence "Alice gave birth to a sane, extraordinarily beautiful daughter", means that her baby was not mad, whereas I think you're meaning to say "healthy". Same with the bit about Frittie and his hemophilia. Otherwise, it's excellent! (As I knew it would be!)